[Ravendust]: 343.Stolen Freedoms
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For more, read the story. I've only got the first chapter written, so don't worry, this is not the end.
If you do not know some of the words (which is without a doubt, but I mean if you can't guess their general meaning) just PM me or something and I'll let you know
2006-06-01 Aeolynn: Awesome! Amazing! *continues on with big words* Stupendous! LOL
2006-08-31 Emily: "However, nearly three hundred years after the interstellar wars had taken place; it was found that a small group of the people had managed to escape their inevitable demise." That semi-colon would be better as a comma.
"hey sent a small well armed expedition up to investigate the moon."... I think it's well-armed, but I'm not too sure.
Very well-written, however. Interesting, for the most part.
2006-08-31 Ravendust: heh, thanks ^^ >_< my computer has a very sucky spell-check tool... So I tend to miss things like these.