[Ravendust]: 343.Stolen Freedoms

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2006-08-28 19:57:13
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Scifi Science Fiction Sci-fi adventure captivity slavery
Stolen Freedoms
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Contest Entry
Style:
novel
The destruction of the Eservie home world was thought to be the end of a brilliant, yet mysterious race. However, nearly three hundred years after the interstellar wars had taken place; it was found that a small group of the people had managed to escape their inevitable demise. They hid themselves on the fourth moon of the planet Fivald, living simply and in peace, each generation passing on the secret knowledge of the race to the next. Within those three hundred years their population grew from a measly seventeen to nearly two hundred. It was at about this time that the structures of their homes were made noticeable to the pirating villains of Fivald. With hopes of great treasures and the possibility of the reinstatement of the interplanetary slave trade, they sent a small well armed expedition up to investigate the moon. This is where our story begins...

For more, read the story. I've only got the first chapter written, so don't worry, this is not the end.

If you do not know some of the words (which is without a doubt, but I mean if you can't guess their general meaning) just PM me or something and I'll let you know

2006-06-01 Aeolynn: Awesome! Amazing! *continues on with big words* Stupendous! LOL

2006-08-31 Emily: "However, nearly three hundred years after the interstellar wars had taken place; it was found that a small group of the people had managed to escape their inevitable demise." That semi-colon would be better as a comma.

"hey sent a small well armed expedition up to investigate the moon."... I think it's well-armed, but I'm not too sure.

Very well-written, however. Interesting, for the most part.

2006-08-31 Ravendust: heh, thanks ^^ >_< my computer has a very sucky spell-check tool... So I tend to miss things like these.


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